AerinTheDragonGirl

This is a part of a story im writing, and since English is my second language im worried ive done alot of mistakes, but that will be fixed later. For now please tell me if the story sounds any interesting and is something i should continue on its just a piece from the middle of the story. ...The beast is only a couple of meters away from him, slowly crawling towards him, with its huge scaled body while staring him in the eyes, green-yellowed eyes that is flooding with pure hatred and hunger, mouth filled with jagged teeth with black goo dripping from each fang as it opens its jaw in a lowered spinechilling hiss. As it takes another step it